Dancing With Silence

[Cyalaytr]

?DANCING WITH THE SILENCE"

SHADOWS OF THE NIGHT
HIDE THE THINGS WE CAN NOT SEE
LURKING IN THE DARKNESS
LIFE'S PLAN BECOMES DISTORTED FOR ME
THE TIME SOME HOW STOPS
AND THE WORLD BECOMES EMPTY
I SEE MY MANY LIVES
AS THEY PASS BEFORE ME
SOME ENDED WITH JOY
SOME WITH A CRY
AND THE OTHERS...
THEY DID NOT WANT TO DIE
THE PATH LESS CHOSEN
IS BUT ONLY A LONELY ONE
ONE WITHOUT PROMISE
A DESTINY WITHOUT ANY ONE
IN LIES THE UNSPOKEN WORDS
YET, NO ONE SEEMS TO CARE
FROM THE ENDS OF THE WORLD
NOTHING SEEMS FAIR
DO WE DANCE ALONE IN SILENCE
OR FOR ONCE LIVE THE DESIRE
AND LET THE ROMANCE BURN
WITH AN INTENDED FIRE.

[Hannibal]

I like the idea behind this one... select cuts of this one, i really like....
but... rhyming seems a tad disshevled.. kind of a crazy time finding the rhyme, if any was intended...
but... I think this poem coulda been shorter and still been okay, some parts were kinda.... confusing.